Wow, you are quite the poet! Nicely done! I am wondering what you mean exactly when you say "That face: a myriad of cliffs and valleys." What do you mean by this? I'm just curious, I'm not trying to tweak it or anything. At least not yet.
This is pretty good! Try to think possibly about making it longer. Stretching things out can be a challenge but a worthwhile one at that. Keep up the great work!
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