I really enjoyed reading this. You paint a vivid picture and I could visualize everything unfold cleanly. Your wording is beautifully paced and requires an emotional response. Though I have never experienced this personally, I feel in synch with you through words which is what I think this medium is all about. Bravo. Please take time and look at my portfolio. I would appreciate anything you have to say.
I appreciate you putting yourself out there. But, honesty is my policy. I think you could've done a bit more with this. Not necessarily with its length, because I have things just as short, but with its content. This topic demands a standard and I find it a bit cliche and lacking direction.
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