I would like to first ask that in the first line did you mean 'The world' or 'Though the world'. The way it reads makes it seem as though a word is missing. Overall the message is great and inspirational. I enjoy that it states, even if the world is against you, never say die, for with death you have been defeated. Good job.
This is a definate go for people who are just starting out with the interactive storylines. It allows them to get a feel of how to play their part in making the story, but it also has some flaws. It doesn't contain very much information and I feel that the parts are sometimes too restricting. other than that it is great.
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