Really nice start! Give me a PM if i'm not adding and you need an extra chapter. What i really liked is the black striped sock, made me want to add a bit! I'm dont like the whole inside her bum type of thing though, i prefer bum cheek... but thats just opinion :) I will be looking forward to more from you! :D
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