I really enjoyed this story. I've come back to this story to check how it has progressed over time, and I'm impressed. The idea of the whole story is very good, and it is also very well written. I personally really enjoyed it, and I hope you keep up the good work.
I feel that this is a great story. It was very well written and it also has a great story to it. I has grown into quite a large story. I especially appreciate the many, many choices that you can choose in each chapter of this story. Just the first chapter has five different choices. Keep up the good work.
This is definitely one of my favorite stories on here. It has really grown into a large story, and I must admit I have enjoyed it. Thank you for starting this story.
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