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Review of First Kiss  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I love the poem. It has emotion and it builds up your tension..then to find out it is a first kiss!! Awesome!
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Review by SilverRaven Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Wow, very good! A completely new way to see a rose!
Raven
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Review of BANG!  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (1.0)
Well, the grammar and punctuation is good! The story, however, is not too good...but kind of funny!
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Review by SilverRaven Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Grammar and punctuation was on point! I kind of had a hard time figuring out who the main character was, at first. Then the more I read I realized who it is. Watch out for "extra" words....go back through it and see if there are unnecessary words that you can take out. I like the story, it is good.
Looking forward to see where this goes, so let me know when you add to it!
Keep writing,
Raven
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Review by SilverRaven Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Deep subject. Very good way to describe how you feel about life and death.
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Review of The Business Man  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Action packed story! Keep the story going. It is going to be good! I like the way you started with, "I look back while running" That grabs the attention of the reader right away.
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Review of The ocean  Open in new Window.
Review by SilverRaven Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Well, I really like this poem! Vivid description! Congrats on getting 3rd Place in "09!
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Review of Turquoise  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Descriptive..Nice little story. Kind of left me hanging!
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Review of Battlefield  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Great poem...Felt like I was there! You did a good job of showing..Not telling!
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Review of Patience  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Really good poem!! I like the way you put the importance of patience in your life, throughout the piece. We all need patience, but like you said, when you ask for it...the trials and tribulations come!
Good job!!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Oh how funny!!! Very well written! I actually could see you running outside, felt the grass on my feet, and even felt the excitement you must have felt!! This is really good!!!
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Review of Arachnids  Open in new Window.
Review by SilverRaven Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
You have a fear of spiders like I do!! Just one mistake, nothing major. Check the 4th line, you have TO twice. By the way, what form of poetry is this? Curious, being a beginner!
Great job!!
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Review by SilverRaven Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is a very helpful article! As a beginner writer, this is something I will read again and again and keep in the forefront of my mind as I write short stories!
Thank you so much for sharing!
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Review of True perfection  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Well written, and makes sense! Welcome to WDC! I am new here as well!
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Interesting spin on a nightmare! I like it! Who is Loki? Just curious! Well written, no errors that I could see. Good job! btw, I am new on here as well, so feel free to visit my portfolio and review my stories
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Review of The Date  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Wow!! Different, but brilliant!
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Review by SilverRaven Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I am new on here, so I don't know, yet, all of the rules for reviewing. But my impression of the poem is first of all, an attention grabber! The way you describe the sport, and how you give it your all, is amazing! The way you choose your words is not ordinary, and that is what kept me reading it!
Very good job!!!


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Review by SilverRaven Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very good! I actually learned a great deal reading this piece. Thanks for sharing!
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Review of a working process  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Not bad at all..Only a few mistakes. Misspelled words. But a really good story so far!
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Review by SilverRaven Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.0)
I am kind of lost here. Sorry
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Review by SilverRaven Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Well written. I became engrossed in the story right away!
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Review of A Hard day  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I like it. Made full circle!
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Review of Milk  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Descriptive. You can almost feel the aggravation that this couple feels!
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Very good story! It let you know about the housewife, and I could just see her in my mind in her house!
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