nice short and straight to the point. I view writing as therapy and an outlet. it allows one to express him/herself freely without limits. well written
funny things bout roads..i wrote on roads in the past.. about how they are one in which you can travel alone or with a person. how there are many options one can travel. I like the concept of the piece in regards to making the best of road one can travel. great work
I like this poem. it allows one to be open to question LIFE.! Life very unpredictable, one would confuse life with a rollercoaster ride. ups and downs and round and round. Life lessons learned, will you learn it. takes one through many emotions. great job
hello there
I must say when I read this poem it took me back. my dad did not serve in the military but was a cook on a navel ship. I am the war vet and I served in Iraq. my dad died in the middle of my tour. I am heartbroken. I must ask you, why are you visiting him online versus in person. wouldn't the feeling be more indepth
my lawd. so beautiful to describe how relevant your mate is to you. beautiful words spoken. It feels so genuine when one express how they feel with there being meaning involved. How I yearn to have my life partner express his gratitude. But at the moment no one have crossed my path. Keep it up please. Continue to show and express love
wow this is such a deep topic. morality issue most definatly. my lawd. I made that mistake and I assure you, other people is not whom one must answer to: its that inner self that unborn baby in the next life. Am i for abortion or not: I rather leave that open but I will say that its a horrible mistake I will never make again. i was young and naive and I didnt know my self worth. I dont know what could have been. Its very precious: LIFE is what Im speaking of. I dealt with alot of pyschological issues over the years, didnt forgive myself and I felt that GOD did not forgive me so i had to reevuate myself and let go. even though it was the worse mistake I ever made I had to accept it and make sure that mistake will never be made.
sorry my comments is rather long winded but I mean this. great poem
Hello there. first and foremost I like the poem. minor typo, u mean "stare" versus "star". I gather from the poem that you are starting a new life. You are not your old self but now u are renewed. You are not the individual you are now connected to your new life which consist of your husband. brillant.
so deep. i too have my solitude moment in which others may not understand my issues in life. We live in this big society so why should we live alone with out interaction or communication with the next person. Sometimes solitude could be a good thing because it allows you to grow. but over all i love this piece.
I like this poem. what you do is focus on our people as a whole. From our elders to our youth. Point is when you say MAN your not speaking of a boy to a man but MAN in regards to the HUMAN Race. U speak of our environment. There is something truely wrong in society. Good job
GOD: such a timid topic. All knowing all seeing. God sees all. Thank you for sharing this peace. its good to get many perspective on the subject at hand. I understand how one can have many guesses but do we really know? This talk I speak of is NOT religious but very spiritual. GOD is...one whom we have an inimate relationship with. GOD is...we and MAN are in the IMAGE of GOD. GOD IS...the light, the way and the truth. Beautful poem. thank you very much
Hello battle
First and foremost, I am a veteran. I have been to war. I served in IRAQ. I want you to know that you really did capture the moment that most of us soldiers have lived through. At times, there is no time to think but JUST do(action). i PRAY THAT people now and then took their training seriously because on that battle field its real. I have PTSD and Its such a hurdle. I did write a poem dedicated to veterans. Great Job Battle
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