I really liked this. I was a little confused in the middle but caught up towards the end to understand. I think it is really relate able as my grandma is the same way.
I really like the story. It has amazing detail and imagery. I assuming this is dance because of the part about springing into action. I like how you never really say what it is that you do. I thought it was well written and had a lot of thought in it.
This is really beautiful. I love the part about blaming nobody but ourselves. I think this perfectly describes what happened on that day. Perfect for the 9/11 anniversary.
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