I really enjoyed reading this. The way the story had a rhythm kept it flowing smoothly. Great Job.
What I really Like:
My favorite stanzia would have to be the second one. which states.
"Holding steady, arms wrapped tight,
I close my eyes, and think of a light
far away, away from here,
a place of comfort, one without fear."
The reason I liked it was because it reminds me of myself and what I do when I feel alone or afraid. I like to imagine a fantasy and try to believe it is as real as the pain I am enduring.
Simple but great. It shows people that if we want something from life we have to go after it. I simply love your poetry. You should send it to a publisher. They are really that good.
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