work on your spelling before submitting. And another thing, get your facts straight. You're brave to put all that out there. Good luck in your writing career.
I think you had the meat of a great story. It needed a little bit of a twist. You are a good writer, but the story was too predictable and I was looking for a different take on a common story. You kept my interest and that is what you are hoping for. Good luck, don't give up.
This is so great! I want to send it to several people I know. This is so inspirering. Did I spell that right? Anyway. I loved both pieces!!! I'd like to write as well. Nice work.
I found this to be very informative and to the point. I like the fact that you have experience on both sides of the "letter". The part of the credentials was good because I always think I haven't got anything because I'm not a published author, yet.
This is valuable and I have made it one of my favorites.
I really like what you were revealing. I felt your true feelings come out and it felt like you were feeling it in the moment. I like that. Now, one thing I think you should know is that before you allow anyone to view your work, read it out loud. Look at your spelling. I'm guilty of this, too. I suggest you edit it and re-post.
this is very sweet. I have not been much of a person to read poetry. I have always respected it but I have been open to reading it more since I became a member of this site. I like your poem.
Very nice. I want my sons to read this and others. They lost their father in 2002 and lost their will to
try to move on. They focus on the loss and their sadness. this is nice.
I look for good stories that make me feel better about this society and this generation. I am tired of the negative stories and headlines and so on, so thank you for this series of short stories of appreciation of other people's acts of kindness.
Well written, sweet.
Tamra B
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