Ok, enjoyed it. Bit confused by the comma end of line 3 followed by Of beginning of line 4, that’s just being picky, made it difficult to know how to vocalise it. Good sentiment and flow otherwise!n pleasure to read.
First of all, I like this. That. Makes it difficult to review! Spoken aloud scanning could be better, but that applies to my efforts as well. It’s good,
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