I love the way you played the words with the justification (centered) like that, it added to the feel of the work. It works well. It shows very well how true deep love can produce deep hate as well. They say that someone who truly hates someone deeply perhaps once deeply loved that same person they hate. Wonderful piece. Thank you.
Interesting. The tone of the work is dark. It gives an interesting mental picture. I wonder if you are speaking of lack of sleep and that lack of sleep can feel like death itself as an insomniac. At least, for me as an insomniac, this is how I related to your work.
Very utterly touching and went straight to the core of my soul. It touched deeply to home for me. A fear all us lovers, wives and girlfriends have of those we love dearly. Our boyfriends, lovers and husbands. It gave me chills.
I am usually not a person for poetry. I find your "Beyond the Gates" very intriguing and it actually left me wanting for more. As poetry is a matter of point of view and inner perspective I've not any tips for improvement other than adding to this, maybe a few more quatrains.
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