Wow, brilliantly portrayed! What a wonderful piece of poetry, Keaton Foster. I loved it, with the rhythm and all that mystery. It was fantastic! :)
My favourite lines were "Look around,If you are alone,Then I mean you,If not,Then I am being,Very specific." Oh, and also " Are my questions Important,Or impotent,I’m a poet,And I know it,I’m a writer,A seeker of answers,I promise nothing,And fight to deliver,Everything"
Brilliantly penned! With suck great creativity! Loved it!
Maybe something you should work on is.......nothing! Haha, seriously, it was a beautiful piece of writing, with that million dollar question,is this life what it outta be? It was really a great mystery and as I read on, I was just sucked into it. For me, I agree with you. My answer is also no.
Hey, if you have any free time, can you please come by and check out some of my work? I would love to hear what you have to say about it. I have always wanted to know other people and that is why I have joined this website. It would be an honour for me if you were willing to be my friend. All in all, it was a great piece of poetry and please, please keep up the good work! I hope to read more of your works!
Well written story. I liked the idea. The starting was great and I loved the flow of the story. Maybe you could work on the middle parts and ending. The way you introduced how the ring worked was kind of straight forward and I felt as if the story ended kind of fast. Overall, I loved your writing and I really hope to read more. Keep up the good work mate. :)
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