Wow, this poem really hit home with me! I'm going through a tough time with my parents, esp. my mom, and I really felt your words! They're deep and real and something that can be related to.
Gasp... I love it. It's beautiful! I have a character in a story I am writing that I compare to a rose and she popped into my head when I read this. Powerful words! :) I can't help but ask myself, though, what does your rose love?
I love the emotion! Emotional writing being a very personal thing, it can sometimes be hard to communicate, but i clearly pick up on the desire and heat. But I feel more behind the words, I feel that you find bliss in her, and appreciate her for more than just her body. I love the reverred image you create of her. The only thing I think could be better is the end, it feels off from the poem, but its all still very good. :)
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