If that isn't the truth, I don't know what is. "The freedoms in which you've been promised are only hidden by underlying anterior motives and calculated planning." I tell you, that ws right on and the line I quoted is what I believe is the most powerful line of the entire piece, though the entire piece was powerful. I truly do like the way you think and can totally align myself with the views you are expressing. Nice!!! I have written some pretty politically viewed pieces but have none published here. Mine is rather militant so...never know who's watching. Peace.
I really like your vocabulary and your ability to allow the depths of your being to flow into what you write. I can feel you and can relate in many ways to what you have written. Keep up the good work and know that the ability to make words heavy enough to penetrate a strangers emotional walls, is a very rare and powerful gift and you have the ability to change people by your words. That's what's up. Peace!!! Oh yeah, there are a few grammatical errors but that didn't create any sort of hindrance of understanding or the lessen strength of the message you sent.
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