This poem has a nice innocent air which keeps it fresh. I remember my childhood like this sometimes. It makes me feel happily young. The words go together well.
This flows matter of fact and is fitting for the end of the story when we realize the speaker is a machine. This makes it concise. It flows mildly which makes me believe. I really enjoyed this story.
This poem actually opens up my mind to how an autistic child experiences his or her reality in life. I think this is meaningful and important for society to know. A autistic person is much more than a disease and has deep meaning of life. Thanks.
I love this poem. I have a lot of hope now. I also write spiritual poetry. It flows good. And sounds just like it was inspired by Emily D. who you wrote above your poem. It also had a good shape to it
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