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8 Public Reviews Given 9 Total Reviews Given |
Do I have a style? It hadn't occurred to me. I look for tense, punctuation, good flow. |
suggesting where a turn of phrase might help the description. I'm pretty good at editing. If it's too wordy - I'll suggest you cut bits. |
fiction. |
not romance! |
Fun |
heavy with description |
violence. Ok - somebody can be violent, even kill somebody as part of the plot, but gratuitous violence - find somebody else to review your work. |