This is a real gem. It grabs you right from the start, hangs on and doesn't let up. My favorite type of mystery has a lot of suspense, a hint of horror (real or imagined), and some type of crime. Well, this story has all the elements of a good mystery. It is well written and flows smoothly. While it may give the reader an inkling of perhaps what is to come, you really can't predict just how badly this situation is going to turn out for all the parties concerned. Fantastic piece, and I enjoyed it tremendously. Crimewriter
This piece is well written and flows smoothly. One reason I enjoyed this so much is because it is 'visual'. It creates images and pictures in the mind of the reader. Well done!
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