I think this is an excellent example of how hard and difficult life can truly be. I've recently had my aunt die, and she was my only extended family that I actually liked, and it just felt like life is so unfair sometimes. I really enjoyed your poem. Good Job.
I really like this poem. I think it really emphasizes what qualities make up a good man. This is really an inspiring poem that really tells people what they should strive to be, and look for in life. Someone who is just, loving, humble, and over-all just good is something we all try to look for. Good job.
Yeah, as usual I enjoyed your story. I think you're a pretty talented writer. I liked the men's reaction to the kiss, which was ever-so believable. I would read a story along those lines, but it might be nice to go into the background of them. "Writing is a socially acceptable form of schizophrenia. XOXO :P
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