I really enjoy your work and I can really relate to this one. I just lost my mother last month and when I recall all those precious memories, I can't help but smile. The games we played, the secrets we shared, and stories told will be with me forever. Thank you for sharing this with us and for reviewing my poem.
Oh how true are words you have written. It seems the more we believe and try to keep faith in God, the more it is tested. But it is written that He will not put more on us than we are capable of handling as long as we pray and have faith. If we do this He always sees us through whatever we're going through.
your title caught my attention, you see sunshine is what my mother called me. it seems as though you too have been blessed with one of God's most precious gifts, that of a true friend. isn't it wonderful to have those in our lives who in the simplest of ways brighten our days. thanks for sharing!
what a beautiful dedication to your brother. i can see that your family is very important to you, that we have in common. thanks for your review on my poem and sharing this one with us.
You definitely have writing skills but I'm not quite sure what you are trying to say this one. The sick and twisted part I definitely get. Maybe this is your attempt at exposing the pressures and day to day hardships of being a kid. It just seems a little bitter to me.
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