I love it when people let their minds and imagination run free. Isn't that what poetry is about?
You do it very well in this piece. There are several lines that I can take and play with all by themselves, kind of like a child plays with a toy. It may sound silly but when your writing mind works that way, it makes my reading mind work that way too. It's cool and I thank you for sharing your mind.
You paint a very nice picture with your words. Great job!
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