Ha ha. Loved it. Put a smile on my face even before I got to the end. I really like that all he is worried about in the end is the launderette. I can see something like this actually happening. A great little read that was easy to follow. Thank you, Micah.
Beautifully written. I did not expect they way it turned out which was a pleasant surprise. Your way of describing things left me with the taste of burnt things in my mouth, the smell of dust heavy in the air and relentless feeling of sharp things poking in the dark. I even choked up a little when Simone died. A wonderful little story. Thank you.
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