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Review by G.S. Ibrahim Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
This was very well written!
I always liked them together, I mean, they have amazing chemistry being both pretty rude..
Or brutally honest, I guess?

Descriptive, and vivid enough, you definitely did well on that part :)
Some grammar and some punctuation.errors I noticed, but other than that..
*thumbs up*
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