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Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow was this story cute! I feel all warm an fuzzy after reading this.

I think that you played with the reader's expectation so well in the first part. The language you use is whimsical and sets the reader up for a world of magic like the genre suggests.

One of my absolute favorite lines is "He felt the star buzz against his palm, looking for cracks." In the moment, the reader assumes it is an actual star and just imagining what it would feel like to hold a star is so interesting.

Overall just a wonderful story and a true pleasure to read!
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