Nice stuff you got! I'd be super surprised if this wasn't somehow inspired from a particular video game--One that hit me in just the right spot recently. Posted 2017, that'd be the same year a certain unspeakable secret would be introduced to it as well! Glad I caught your modification.
Sorry to go off on that interpretation of mine--I certainly enjoy the sort of evocative, "futility of the situation ensures progress within it" sort of vibe. Real sad, but it's good stuff. Referencing a snake also makes me think of other figures in various lore associated with gaining forbidden knowledge of course.
I thought that was pretty funny x3 I'm a big fan of using lots of metaphors for fighting off the call of nature and such, so this was definitely a treat in that way x3 And I think it's kinda neat personifying the methods of holding it back. Fun read x3
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