This was beautiful, it gave me shivers. As soon as he started to smile after his twin's death I got that sinking feeling in the bottom of my stomach. I love how you the beginning was more confused and to me, it seemed that the atmosphere was more hazy, and then at the end everything was very clear and dark.
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