I love this. This is beautiful. And brave. Not many people talk about their BPD diagnosis. I have it too, actually and BD, among some fun other things. As scary as it can be, what’s something you enjoy about your disorder? Mine is how in tune with other people’s emotions I can be. I feel empathy on a super power like level. It comes in handy with writing too.
This is a beautiful piece. It was an easy read, with a rhythm that takes you along for the ride. My favorite part was, “The world still turns, but I stand still, An empty space, a hollow will.”I like to talk about time a lot in my poetry and how moments like this one, deep sadness, can cause it to corrupt or even cease to exist. Anyway, beautiful job. Keep writing!
I love this! It has such wonderful rhythm, so song-like, and throughout trying not to smile with your zeal, you can also feel the pain of the author. Great poem. I love work that can make you feel opposites all at once.
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