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Review Style
Minimalist. Focus on technical. I also look at how a work would fit into the traditional publishing landscape. I don't use a template. Warning: I am Australian, and so cultural differences may apply.
Favorite Genres
Most, really.
Least Favorite Genres
Fan-fiction
Favorite Item Types
Short stories and essays.
I will not review...
I will not review porn, fan-fiction or pro-religious/OTT-pro-USA essays. No interactives either, please.
Public Reviews
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Review of My Useless Muse  
Review by s
Rated: E | (3.5)
I like the section on your writing space. I go through periods where I tidy mine (once every 6 months or so), but it degenerates quickly. The muse bit, though, did feel superfluous. I wanted to know more about your writing space! I could picture it, and found I wanted to see it and explore it. Nicely done.
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Review of Moving On  
Review by s
Rated: E | (4.5)
Sad, touching, and could relate to a soldier from any war. But setting it so far back in time does make subsequent wars seem more futile, as though they really do solve nothing. However, having set it in the Civil War, the language is a little too contemporary. That is my only complaint. Great piece.
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Review of Plastic Paradox  
Review by s
Rated: E | (4.5)
This came across to me as almost a song. The "It's a face..." stanza seems like a chorus, one that could be repeated twice atthe end. All it lacks is a sort of bridge, and it would be a nice 4/4 rhythm for a sort of prg rock band. Yeah, I liked it. Well done.
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Review by s
Rated: E | (4.5)
This actually felt like it had quite a sad undertone which was maintained throughout the piece. The image of the world coming to a halt for one lone trumpeter, and then continuing on as if nothing had happened is a pleasant one. I enjoyed this piece. Well done.
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Review by s
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Despite one or two clunky lines ("Hanging all gangly in the air") this poem brings a touch of pathos to the often maligned characters. Well done.
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Review by s
Rated: E | (3.0)
While the concept was interesting and the character of Draco well written, the character of Potter did not feel 'right', even though he is not the focus of the action. Also, the grammar errors did make it difficult to get into the flow of the story. This, I feel, however, could easily be extended into something a little stronger and more in-depth as the concept is very good and the character of Alex is intriguing.
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