I really like the overwhelming truth in the poem. It creates a sense of comfort and honesty because people can identify with the poem. Overall I think it's great, but maybe a bit more figurative language or details. Good job, keep writing! :D
I absolutely love this! Amazing use of figurative language and I really loved the rhyme. The last line really ties it all together; like a bow on top. Good job!
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