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Review of The slave  Open in new Window.
Review by Alice Anne Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Beautiful story well written.
Keep up the good work.
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Review of A New Way of Life  Open in new Window.
Review by Alice Anne Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Maggie,
As the head of my family I am still under authority and punishment of God should I lead my wife astray. The word says the head of the woman is the Man and the Head or man is Christ.
I have been blessed with a wife that does believe that I have final say in all things under Christ. She freely says (making many women mad) that I have final say and that she must do as I say or face the consequences. One thing her so-called friends hated was when I made her cover her head when we went to an Amish community. Her friends thought me making her veil herself was terrible.
You have brought this forth scripturally sound and even references to the laws of the land are correct.
As with the gospel, the truth hurts and makes the rebellious mad. Women forget the Lord has a Kingdom. Not a democracy or republic.
The church is the betrothed of Christ and the bride he comes for will be obedient and one that takes heed to his word and chastisement.
While I am a man I am still the betrothed of Christ and subject to his discipline. Unlike many rebellious people that claim to be Christians I not only try my best to follow his word but accept and am thankful for his punishment. I would rather be punished as his betrothed than damned as a bastard. I accept the punishment of his children and bride something of a bllessing and not to be spoken or written against.
The word says that the tongue is the pen of a ready writer. What is in a person's heart they will speak. The same will they write.
Your story was great.
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Review by Alice Anne Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I read your other work as well and find it scripturally correct. i also find that when people write, post or speak the things that should be in a free society the ones that are rebellious and do not wish to submit to authority get mad.
Great story.
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Review by Alice Anne Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I really enjoyed your story.
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Review by Alice Anne Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I loved the way this was written. Honest and easy to read. I also liked the idea of educating public awareness.
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Review of Home at Last  Open in new Window.
Review by Alice Anne Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
That is an awsome story. I really loved it.
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