I like this poll a lot!!! I love cats! People on here should vote for cats. My second choice is a Dog so its okay. My favorite dog right now is the Norwegian Elkhound. I own and love Maine Coons! My cat Indiana Jones is a fluffy maine coon and he's 25lbs! All him not fat. Anyway thanks for this poll!
This is very funny and has a good flow to it. I think the sentence at the end where you say, "A beer for one who followed." I think should instead say, "A beer for THE one who followed. You're missing THE. I really enjoy your style. Keep it up! Have a good day!
I like this it's very encouraging for young people. The rhyming is there. I'm not sure if this is a typo/grammar error, but the line where you say "Accept the challenge, leap over the hurdles of race" I don't know if your talking about an actual race or someones ethnicity but if it isn't about ethnicity then the sentence should read. ", leap over the hurdles in the race." Also the sentence before that has a grammatical error as well. "Crush the difficulties, Spread smile on your face." should read, "Crush the difficulties, and spread a smile across your face, or maybe spread a smile ON your face." Otherwise it's a nice piece. Good Job!
This is a beautiful love poem! You're words are flow very well. There doesn't appear to be any spelling or grammar errors. I can't wait to read more poetry from you. I hope you continue to write so passionately. This is a good start. I really appreciate it. Good Job!
This was a very funny story that kept me interested in what the sound could be. I wondered along with Fred. Then I thought maybe he was hearing things. He is new to living alone and seems to go through what everyone goes through when they move into a new place. Getting used to all the new sounds. I enjoyed it very much. It kept my attention. Good Job!
I like the content. There is a spelling error in the beginning where it says "Through the stars I'll SORE" instead of sore it should be soar. I can relate because dreaming is also my escape from the mundane life I live. Thanks for sharing your work!
Thank you for this beautifully written and so emotionally raw piece. I can relate in the sense that it can take me back to when my husband and I were first together. Everything we did was done together. I put myself in the position of thinking what if that were us? I couldn't stop living but it would be painful to continue. I would most likely feel the same.
I liked it very much and I am personally very into the Dystopian genre. Your work is nothing like the ones I've read. It has it's own new take on the dystopian idea. Not futuristic. It's like post apocalyptic sort of. There are a couple of errors though in the beginning when you wrote: "Tyri aims a kick at kick at a nearby tree." It should be: Tyri aims a kick at a nearby tree. It looks like you wrote "a kick at" twice. Other than that it's very good. Keep it up I would look forward to seeing this completed!
S.D. Teller
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