I ENJOYED IT UNTIL THE LAST PARAGRAPH,,,,MY OPINION YOU SHOULD REWRITE LAST PARAGRAPH..CONCEPT IS GOOD BUT WORDS ARE WRONG (JUST AN OPINION) i BELIEVE YOU HAVE ALOT OF TALENT
DARK INDEED AND FULL OF HOPELESSNESS,,,LEAVES ME FEELING SAD,BUT CAN BE REFLECTED ON LATER AS A TESTIMONY TO PROGRESS . THUS BEING ESSENTIAL AND YOUR POTENTIAL.....WOW,,,YOU HAVE ENORMOUS POTENTIAL
INDEED I KNOW THIS OH SO WELL,,,,FREEDOM AND REAL LOVE IS GODS,,,,,BONDAGE AND DEPRESSION COME FROM HURT AND WE ALL REALLY HOPE FOR LOVE AND FREEDOM,,,,,I LOVED IT AND IT IS ME ONLY A SHORT TIME AGO....AND IM GRATEFUL TO YOU THANK YOU
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