The dialogue is impressive and entertaining. I enjoyed the overall story. Though, it moved too quickly and was sometimes hard to follow. I liked the descriptions. I hope to read more of this story.10
I like the narritive alot. But I I am unsure of what the poem is about. I can relate to the topic of college. And I agree that sometimes it is important to grow up. In life your choices are not going to please everyone.
I hope I understood what you were trying to say .
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