Stardust's (stardust202) Reviews

Stardust

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#2305381

Review of Teddy Bear Hockey

Review by Stardust

Rated: E

| (4.5)

This wonderful poem is great for children I read it to my kids tonight they loved it. Thanks for sharing!

Write on!
Peace and Love,

Stardust

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#2305368

Review of If I Were Invisible

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

I enjoyed this poem very much,
Thank you for sharing your view
I hope you continue writing
I hope you'll share it too.
We all have grand gifts to share
I wish we were all as talented as you.

Peace and Love,
Stardust

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#2204298

Review of Love Is

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

This poem is well written, the comparasons are one we can all feel!

Keep writing!

Stardust202

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#2200420

Review of A WONDERLAND

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Rated: 18+

| (4.0)

This is a beautiful poem, vivid and emotional! I enjoyed reading it! Keep up the good work! Thanks for sharing.

Stardust202

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#1976598

Review of SOLDIERS FOR LIFE

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Rated: E

| (3.0)

Hey Babygirl,

This piece is precious to many, I think you wrote from the heart that's great!

Note: now that its down maybe going over it again, you might want to rearrange some of the wording.

Nice poem though, keep up the good work!

Stardust

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#1976595

Review of The Office

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Rated: 13+

| (3.0)

Hey I really enjoyed the story!
Maybe next time you could leave a little space between the paragraphs so the readers can see it more clearly.

Awesome write on!

Stardust

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#1965154

Review of Iron City

Review by Stardust

Rated: E

| (4.0)

Hey Knight,
I enjoyed the poem, the words were insightful and filled with vision. They were discriptive but not completely revealing. I was a little stumped by some of the phrasing it tripped a little in some spots. Maybe on re-write you could work on being just a little smoother. Let the words glide off the tongue.
Thanks for sharing with me. Keep up the good work!

Sincerely,
Stardust

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#1965142

Review of Collection of Poems

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Rated: E

| (3.0)

I feal that these poems are heartfelt.However the tone could use a little smoother sound. Thanks for sharing. Keep ip the good work

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#1965046

Review of Mother

Review by Stardust

Rated: E

| (4.0)

Hello,
I enjoyed this poem very much,true writing from the heart. Lets me know that you genuinely love what you do. Not everyone can express that much feeling in their writing! Wonderful talent. Keep up the good work!

Sincerely,
Stardust