Its its quite good. for me it needs to be sung differently or the background music needs to be different. I can't really tell witch.the ending need some work to. But all and all qutie good.
I love the beat this is the Fifth time i listened to and i stil love it. The gatair rocks. Who ever singing is pretty good and over all i liked the song. Wait scratch that the sixth time i liistened to it. You just need to do something to the singing he dosen't very much when he sings. i think it works well for this song but you might want to watch that if you do any more songs.
That was cool i mean not the part about him trying to hurt the guy but the rest was cool. Not very much help i know. I had to read it a couple times before it really sunk in if that helps any.
It was really good. Ilight say that to everyones storys or what ever i read but i could see or well feel what you meam in your wordsbut umm When i go there i just lie down on the floor or on my bed an slip away. isn't that an suppost to be an and.
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