I lost my son. He was born August 5, 2007 and he passed August 23, 2007. He was a preemie, he weighed 1 pound 3 ounces and when he passed he weighed 1 pound 14 ounces. He got an infection and just declined from there.
Thank you for the lovely story reminding me that my son is always with me.
This was a lovely poem. So many people show the good side looking in, but what about the one that is looking out-that want's to be where you are? You convey this beautifally.
At first, I thought that the person might be able to get out, but then you show that the door is locked and that they are unable to get out and that they had finally died seeing that little bit of feedom that they would never have. Superb job.
Wow, this was an amazing story. I was drawn in by the fact that I love poetry and the medical field. It's nice to see that someone has the ability to place both of them in writing with such ease. Y ou have done an amazing job. I am captivated by the whole idea of the story from the first word until the very end. I wanted to know who the killer was and the idea of the poem Prince was superb. I will definitely be reading the rest of the story as well as the stories of Jerry Powell and L.A. Powell. You have done an amazing job, well done.
This is an amazing story. I couldn't stop reading. I'm sorry that Kevin lost his family and Samatha. Did they leave him, did they die? It's wonderful how Kevin had so many faces and no one seemed to know who he was except Justin. I wish that this story was able to have a more happy ending, but in truth we are sometimes so hurt that we try and cover up the deep pain with someone or something else.
aww this was a wonderful story about two best friends. its sad to hear that one of the friends had to die, but its good to know that he had at least saved his life in the end.
this is a story of friends that seemed to hate each other in the beginning but had begun to be friends in the end. i wish that sam and jake had been able to see each other one last time.
wonderfully wordeed story.
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