oh that is wonderful! its short but that means nothing as all the words are perfect in every part of the sentence, it's simply amazing.
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Spirit Angel.
Oh thats an amazing poem! it is a joy to read and i love how every line has that emotional click, or at least to me. every line has a wonderfull message and overall it is just wonderfull. from your friendly cowgirl
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Spirit Angel
That is some interesting dialog right there. I love that dialog it's so dramatic and funny to me anyway. I love it, it's awesome! I don't have any suggestions. Keep on writting BlueMoon
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Spirit Angel
This is a very nice short story and I loved it. Honestly, I could predict something that could be written to continue this if you were to but it was a nice read I didn't see anything wrong but I could also be wrong. I hope you keep writing and look forward to seeing your other work.
this is an amazing poem, it is an amazing read and brings joy to be able to read it. I love the rhythm and how the word's at the end rhymes with the next end. It is nice and overall a well-done piece.
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Spirit Angel
oh my goodness what a tragedy! lol. this is a wonderful short story and funny at that. Honestly, I have nothing to say other than it is an amazing humorous read. I hope that never happens to me. lol. Keep on writing!
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Spirit Angle
This is an amazing short story and it was a pleasure to read it. i love how you compared the air to an apple, it is not every day you see that. In the beginning you say "lotto" what is that? do you mean lottery? just curious why are certain words bolded is there a meaning behind that? of course i am not trying to be a debby downer it is a wonderful peace i am just confused by those things. Honestly i love the creativity you put in this and the effort is shown, Keep on writing!
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Spirit Angel.
Well all be darn ain't that one strange poem. It's quite interesting and it sure is a delight to read. The concept is wonderful and a well written piece, I can only say to keep on writing. Just some friendly advice from your cowgirl over here!
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Spirit Angel
Though it is short it is very well written. I love t.he concept and it is a very interesting poem. Overall the title caught my attention and the prom easy to read. It was an enjoyable read overall.
That is an amazing poem i am confused by the word Starer, not sure what that word is, i also have alot t learn and i apologize if that is a word. I am only a high school student but this was a very well written peace one that i can impicture a story in my mind, it is just a wonderfull read for me.
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Spirit Angel
This is a wonderful quite interesting story, it actually had me kinda grossed out when thinking about how that man walked into the phycatrists office. It was strange but something well written. I enjoyed reading this i thought it was quite intreguing about a man with the worst luck of all, truely an amazing peace. keep writting!
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Spirit Angel
This is amazing however you have a flaw in the very beginning, you spelled Launch instead of Lunch. It was just something i noticed off the bat. Well besides that it well written i did love reading this story, it was a very neat concept of an old photo and all i think it went too fast for find the owner idk i just thought it was a bit quick and all but it's still wonderfull the way it is!
I just love this short story! i couldn't stop reading! it's amazing! i believe this could be trurned into an excelent story!! oh my gosh i just think this is an amazing peace of work you have displayed! it's created wonderfully and has an excelent time line nothing runs into eachother, everything is just great! it was an honor to read this.
Awe thats amazing!!!! i love how you describe everything how you start off to how you end, very emotional to me and very outdoorsy!!!!
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Spirit angel
Ps keep writting!!!!!!!!!!!!!
That is an amazing poem!! it's such a delight to read, such an imagination! i love the concepts in the poem you have written and how you compare them to us, its just an overall wonderfulll read, i'd love to read more of your work because if this is that good then i belive the rest too will be amazing
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Spirit Angel
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