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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
this was a very delightful piece I really enjoyed the only real suggestions here that I would make is that I would make this a poem instead of a song but what do I know about that. I thought it was very deep and inspiring. I really do love your choice of words...It would be harder for me to do so. I think this song is trying to send out a very important message:~) I saw no errors,but as music and poetry goes format and grammar may not even be necessary..lol well thankyou for this piece I enjoyed it wery much...keep writing=P
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