WILL THE ELF GAIN HIS MEMORY OR WILL THE GIRL FIND ANOTHER ELF,FIND OUT ON THE NEXT EPISODE OF VEIL OF DEATH!
Serious note very concise and Hooked me quick. Continue this story.
Talk about saved by the bell! Wow what a concise and full story. David was giving up on all life and then nostalgia wrapped it's comforting grip around and lived through the memories of peak life and then the call that gave life new meaning. 5/5 Amazing detail .
Wow I want some Butterfly kisses and Baby bear hugs now! Wow I was not sure at first but then you hooked me like I was a fish looking for it's next adventure while hungry lol. I really enjoy the suspense and how you covered all your tracks. This has to be the best story I have read in a while . I am new here well kind of I was here in 2014 and 2015 but, lost my account and haven't wrote since. So I put a short story on my account If you would review it I'd be so grateful.
It is a great story or account. So positive yet I see through it and the pain is what caused the strength and the shift of perspective. Very well written and the message is clear. No matter what find the Positive in every moment .
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