That was amazing. I love the plot twist at the end. It wasn't really a plot twist more like a realization. Anyways, my favorite lines were, "feeling serene enough to share my serenity with another," They flowed nicely and rolled off my tongue beautifully! Please continue to amaze the world with your wonderful thoughts and words.
This poem is absolutely amazing!! You are obviously very skilled in writing poetry. How did you get the poem to flow so easily? I read it out loud and all the words just go together and roll off the tongue nicely. I love the lines, "And i became thoroughly consumed By your radiant and lustrous beauty." Also the line, "That neverending road of grace and inspiration" puts a good feeling in my mouth. I think that this poem is beautiful. It is a little short but completely makes up for it by having such great descriptive words! I just wanted to let you know that I became thoroughly consumed by this poem's radiant beauty. :) Please continue to bring happiness to people with your words.
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