Wow. Would that mean she wants to be sad? That being so miserable is her epic tragedy and overcoming it finally is her happy ending? Really thought provoking and kind makes me wonder about myself. About others. About everyone and how much everyone else seems, in a way, like this.
That's new, for me at least. You hear the princess ended up with a peasant because of a prophesied curse or something is killing all of the royal family for revenge. But I've never once heard that they were raised by a peasant so that they could be fair rulers. Simple. Quick. Smooth. To the point. And in my honest opinion, original.
Wow. Now that touched me. Made me a bit teary eyed. I couldn't say what needs to be changed. I don't think I have the right to say it. I'm truly glad I stopped to read it.
I guess it might have even touched me more because I have experienced a person of that sort.
Now that was something altogether original. Pretty funny too. That takes a lot of guts to go back out on stage after having a steel toed shoe thrown at you. It takes a bigger fool to throw it just so they can hop around with one shoe for the rest of the night.
I love the Pythagorean Theorem joke. That locked me in.
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