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Review by spaul Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
A Very well written and expressed writing that touches mind and soul. Some lines although written in simple lamgauge but successfully explain and express the huge deep philosophy and feelings.
These words are most impressive:-
"Now at twenty-eight years old I am having my third daughter and it is clear to me that not all the feelings of becoming a mother for the first time go away after the first time! On my third I still have feelings that I had then like fear, hope, and yes the second guessing my choices"

Excellent!
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Review of God Is Working  Open in new Window.
Review by spaul Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
WOW!
This poem is so soulful and thoughtful!
An enlightening piece infact:-

"Meanwhile, God is working,
holding your loved one close.
Controlling suffering,
pouring love with each dose."

Lucky are the people who are able to feel God's grace and the writer seems to be one out of those!
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Review by spaul Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)


Very emotional words:-
"YOU DON'T KNOW THE THOUGHTS THAT I HAVE.
YOU DON'T REALIZE THE HURT I HIDE INSIDE"

The writer has successfully expressed the feelings of this kind of situation!
Overall Nice, sweet, simple words of this poem touch the reader's heart!
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Review by spaul Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very true and inspiring words:-
"Your words can move mountains, if you desire"
"Your words can give power to the powerless,"
The writer infact knows the power of words and also that of inducing and boosting will-power!
It is infact a very postive and impactful writing

www.book.bookemon.com/450



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Review of Untitled Emotions  Open in new Window.
Review by spaul Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
It is highly emotional and nalysing poem with painful and soul words:-

"No you can't trick me with your artificial friendship
I'm gone and you have nothing to hold me back.
I'm too smart to let you get inside me again.."

The word knit is smart and appealing that tickles reader's mind!The lines are little long!
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Review of My Angel  Open in new Window.
Review by spaul Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)


VERy sweet emotional poem with very lovely impact on heart and mind. So true description of a friend indeed!
"By God's grace
My angel was sent to me
And through God's blessing
Friends forever we will be"

magical words depict so much of dedication!

Words HEAL:-
http://www.freewebs.com/awakenthesoul
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Review of Sad Ending  Open in new Window.
Review by spaul Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
The poem is so painful but at the sametime a reality of times. There are many people who are drowning in the mud of depression, frustrations and addictions!
The words:-
"now on perscription drugs,
still with gangs and thugs,
her whole world is bending,
and that was her sad ending"

are really sad!

Visit
www.book.bookemon.com/450
there is a book "STRENGTHEN THE SOUL" whcih is written to heal one of these frustrations and depression!
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Review of All Alone  Open in new Window.
Review by spaul Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
The poem is very emotional and painful too!
When a reader feels so much pain after reading only, what would be the situation of sufferers?

"She knows it's time for sure
Life is coming
And the daddy's too late
She wishes he were here
For the baby's sake"


may daddy come back soon!
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Review by spaul Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
This is a wonderful idea! WOW!
The knit of words to present the idea in a creative form is even more beautiful and impresses and stimulates perhaps every reader.
The websites mentioned are a good source of knowledge for every reader who reads this useful article.
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Review by spaul Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
very emotional and touching poem but it is better to express such painful emotions and then forget. The people who break hearts do not deserve so much of love:-

"Then one day you were gone forever.
I will always remember the day you
Broke our promise....
And broke my heart."

few lines, but nicely expressed!
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Review of Just a Thought  Open in new Window.
Review by spaul Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)


The words are infact so touching and tickling
:-"And I think
(Son,)
I would rather live without
Than to have lived
Without living"

An emotional expression of one's heart in perhaps true sense!Nice choice of words,, good format, keep writing!
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Review of The Door  Open in new Window.
Review by spaul Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
WOW!
"The Door of opportunity
Yet bobbing in the sea"

so positive and inspirational lines,lovely writing!
The format, creativity and knit of words is just wonderful!
"Sometimes it is a Door of Hope
Sometimes not even close
Sometimes we have a need to cope
With ups and down and sorrows and woes"

VERY TRUE AND USEFUL WORDS!Keep writing!

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Review by spaul Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
A very sweet and emotional expression about the family ties and relations.
The lines are touching:-
" The lessons that I learnt while watching them,
The do’s and don’ts I picked along the way,
Are now the familial traits and emblem,
That guide my own behavior to this day."
So true words!
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Review of Love Untold  Open in new Window.
Review by spaul Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)


A very emotional sweet piece of writing that pierces the hearts of readers. The lines are full of love and dedication to the beloved:-

"Or would you have grinned,
and pushed me to the side,
not really knowing
you had crushed my pride?

Beautiful expression, brings tears!
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Review of Darling  Open in new Window.
Review by spaul Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)

Very emotional and magical words that are enough to explain the situation and scenario:-

"It's been six months since we've last met,
Six months since the day we parted,
Oh darling, oh how I missed you,
Are those feelings still warm and true?"

Choice of words is ver nice and poem touches, so has a very good impact!
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Review of Stronger  Open in new Window.
Review by spaul Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
THIS is a beutiful poem full of emotions but does not hurt rather induce strentgh into those who are hurt!
increases wil power, a must read song!
"You can bend, but I won't break
My heart's no longer yours to take
I'm getting stronger day by day"
Wondeful words!
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Review of Euphoria  Open in new Window.
Review by spaul Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
WOW! great!
it is
--unique
--- short
--- simple
---- beautiful
---- intelligent!
"Awakening
deep muddy passion
withholding
unraveling
then soulfully flying."

magical words impressive and impactful
Keep writing
fighting with words


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Review by spaul Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
VERY sweet and inspirational poem .
The words are wisely chosen and written inpraise of ALmighty God:_
"how blessed we are to have our sins forgiven,
as our voices rejoice, singing in heaven."

Lucky are those who have experienced grace of God in their lives.

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Review of Lord's guidance  Open in new Window.
Review by spaul Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Nice poem written in the praise of God.
"Father, please give me
Your guidance
And know forever more
Your subject I will be."

Of course Almighty god is great and lucky are those who have got the chance to experience his grace.

God is
G --great
o ---- occult
D -- divine



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Review of Science Fiction  Open in new Window.
Review by spaul Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is an unique style of writing fiction!
Is it Poetic fiction!
simple lines drag into fiction and end like a poem.
Over all nice imagery and the unique cname:- nimbus six
"A bronze tibbon eyes the flat horizon while
pink limfs dip their regal necks in dance
and sim beetles scurry underfoot."

choice of words is also good!
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Review of A Tennis Match  Open in new Window.
Review by spaul Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
It is a very simple, beautifully flowing poem with a touch of emotion. wisely chosen words to make it entertaining reflect the ability of the writer to express a game poetically.
"Hit the ball over,
The opponent shouts, “Fault!”"

The rhyming words seem to add a lyrical effect!
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Review of Cloudburst  Open in new Window.
Review by spaul Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Short writing tries to explain and initiate big philosophy.
Unique style
foramt
use of words
makes reader to think many times
"But what are these patterns that will scar – it seems you can keep secrets."

these patterns might be the marks of happenings in life.

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Review of The End of Time  Open in new Window.
Review by spaul Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)


The answer to it:-
"Can we predict what happens next?
Where the page lies and in what text"
is perhaps big no!
It is an emotional as well as philosophical writing that catches the attention of readers and compels him to go through it atleast twicw.
OVERall very nice!
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Review of Jelly Bean  Open in new Window.
Review by spaul Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
A sweet little poem that is simple but wise.
Wisely knit words in a rhyming manner catch everyone's attention.
"Everyone is all the same
A few are unique
In a world of jelly beans
We can all be sweet"
Very true feeling, May it become the truth!
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Review of Reasons  Open in new Window.
Review by spaul Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
WOW! VERY nice emotional and paining piece infact. The wrtiting looks very wise as writer has stressed upon the fact that there may be a reason behind every happening or act, however the reason may be a logical one or may be some selfishness.
The poem displays the ability of writer to analyse emotional confusions.
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