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Review of Chains of Ice  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Ah there ya go. Awesome writing there's not too much I can say to improve so yeah, oh and fyi the ranting was supposed to be in my short story, just so ya know ;)
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Review of The Nail  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello (this is your brother by the way, yes the one and only) Anyway I thought that the story was pretty good. I like the analogy between the rusty nail and your life. The last line about the rust and dirt being under your finger nails is good because it's like saying that you can't quite get to the the rust and dirt that's in your life. So yeah it's great and just keep writing.
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