this is a great flash fiction, to be honest its probably the best I read so far. it seems to me that this whole flash fiction is based on the people who care about you. this is just a great piece of art that you have made waiting to be critiqued and it in my view is amazing in most parts because it makes you feel your pain and what your going through. I rate this particular item of yours a 4.5 because its great but it lack the conviction or point that your trying to get to the viewer or reader, but other than that its an amazing piece of art (book/flash fiction) I also like the fact that you were imagining the type of things that people do for respect. a in the title know my hell, I think that's just a little bit overpowering for a title but I don't get what know my hell is trying to persuade people to do?. as an author to get the audience to get hooked onto your writing you have to explain not only through the text but also through the title. for me, I don't know what the title would persuade me to think or do. I hope your happy with your work because I am and this is a flash fiction that is great in most parts but need to be more evaluative in some other parts. would you please tell me what you were going for in this particular item?
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