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Review by not bukowski Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
I really liked "her eyes blurred mercifully". There was some stuff I didn't understand,why did he not pursue a reason, if they were in love, or had built up any sort of communication,it seems the dialogue would have been more intimate.The way it's written feels almost like I'm reading about a stalker.Because he's thinking, we're in love, always will be,..
I love your descriptions,"tangled memory like vivid film","a kiss stopped the beating of their hearts"
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