This is a very short poem but a very good one! I see the grammar work you've done and I applaud you. *Claps* - I could see the enviroment you painted. But the question I have, what was the monster? Honestly, my guess that it was a feral wolf... Anyways, keep up the good work on the poems and anything your gonna pull out of that mind of yours. Good job!
This is a great story, a little short. It's begging for community additions... I love this story, I thought eating the cupcake would've been an Alice in Wonderland kinds of growth, I was wrong. There are so many routes but some just end momentarily. . . Wish there were more quaility stories. Keep up the good work, yours or the community.
Amazing poem,while it is about sex (or I think it is.. yeah it is. You cant be too sure with poems.) and sex is an awesome thing (While I'm more of a guy that likes adventure.) It's a great poem, (and it all rhymes!) 10/10. Best poem I've read in a while.
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