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4 Total Reviews Given
Review Style
Brutal (but positive!) HONESTY
I'm good at...
Pointing out errors, catching craft (way a piece is written) anomalies and inconsistencies.
Favorite Genres
Fantasy and Whimsical elements, historical fiction, Sci-fi / Dystopian / Futuristic GIVE ME FEEELSSSS
Least Favorite Genres
Realistic and Modern like ewwwww
Least Favorite Item Types
Interactive stories (confusing as hell)
I will not review...
your porn stash. That's about it.
Public Reviews
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Review of The Last Egg  Open in new Window.
Review by Jaye Williams Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Ahhh, I realize that this is a short story for a contest (an old one at that), but I think there is a lot of expansion potential here! There is a lot of Eragon-esque trends, so it would be really cool to see how it was different (the dragons mentally enslave or something) and the reasoning behind Ava's and Eaton's thievery. Maybe they are the villains despite being main characters, and the king is the true hero. Anyways, I will favorite this in the meantime and hope for more *Heart*
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Review of Robot and Devil  Open in new Window.
Review by Jaye Williams Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I keep coming back to this poem over and over again, and I'm not sure why. But I think I'm beginning to figure it out. It's relatable, as far as poems go, and its rhymes are nice and succinct. The word choice though!!! It's simply delicious. I keep picturing this square-headed robot and this stereotypical devil sitting next to each other on a cliff overseeing a vast sea of white. And at the base of the cliff are hands, black hands reaching up to drag you in. All in all, pretty awesome (and creepy)!!!
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