This story is great! I for one loving when humiliating things happen to others. Most of my favourite Characters are getting the shamefull treatment in this interactive story. Especialy the part where Ash is being diaperd by the lovely nurse Joy cathers my attention. There is much more potential in this story, but I reccon it's difficult creating a nice interface when you can only add a max of 5 chapters. I hope to experience new writing soon, I have read all the chapters that are in here now, well almost :P
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