First thing first, that was amazing. Absolutely beautiful. From the first paragraph that I had read, a hook swooped down and pulled me into this story. The more I read, the more I wanted to read. In fact, I am skipping class right now to read this. At first, I was just going to browse through some stories, just investigating if there was anything of interest. I'm not sure what compelled me to click on this story; perhaps it was the title.
Nonetheless, this story is possibly the best written short stories I have ever read. These are the kind of things I wish my mind was capable of producing. I envy your talent, sir. This story was both heart-warming and tear-jerking. The whole story unravels, and it brings such a warm feeling. When the gunfire opened in the school, my heart twisted and turned. I am eager to know if you're currently working on continuing this piece, or if you're even planning on continuing it. If you're not planning on continuing this story, I advise you to.
I honestly believe that if you continue to write this story with as much skill and care as you have been, it will definitely be a best-seller when published.
Once again, beautiful story, and I wish you the best of luck on your future pieces.
-Michael
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