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Review of My Perfect Dream!  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Awww... this is so sweet!

'My perfect dream would be of you,
Standing before me.
Looking as lovely as you always do.'

It's nice to think that someone cares as much of you to say that he/she is his/her dream.

'Wake hurriedly my love,
Your perfect dream awaits!'

It's wonderful to know that every time you wake, your dream is right next to you, since not a lot of people achieve their dreams.

A simple, but very beautiful poem :>
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Review of Writing.Com 101  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
I already have 7 merit badges and it says I only have 6.
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Review of Lisa Smiled  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (2.5)
'Lisa flew up the stairs, but it was obvious Anne was already dead, a broken neck. She called security who called 911. Sitting down, her heart pounding, she waited for the police to arrive. Suddenly, however, she realized how quiet it was, and feeling genuinely terrible about it, Lisa smiled.'
Was she relieved that someone (Anne) died?
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Review by sofiazesca Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
'Something that lets me get lost in a world of just my empty thoughts and just the paper and pen know what I write.'
'I feel like the more I write the more I get closer to finding what I I'm looking for. That being a "question" to an "answer"'
True. I'm sure anyone can relate to that.
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Review of The pain within  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
'None knows of it but me'
It's true. I like that line so much. I guess we both agree that no one knows the pain, how bad you are going through, but us ourselves.
No one really realizes that until something happens after, then it's too late.
we ourselves just have to fight through the pain, that we are going through
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Review by sofiazesca Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
I feel so sad reading this poem. I certainly do not want to be in that person's shoes, but I'm definitely sure that I'd feel the same way if I get hurt the same.
I guess we only then realize our mistakes and wrong doings when something bad happens after, and then it's too late.
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Review of Invisible Man  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
This poem is very beautiful, and yet very emotional. I want to get to know this person so much, and I want so badly to make him/her happy, and comfort him/her every time she/he is sad.
This poem really struck me, but it also inspired me to help and comfort other people feeling the same way.
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Review of we are broken  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
okay... so we have to explore the meaning of this?
Though for me, I somehow think that this also symbolizes us, people. Well, not all people of course, but some.
BROKEN has a lot of different meanings, and I somehow feel a bit uneasy saying it.
But I don't get the last lines, though. But I thinks it means that being broken gives us the opportunity to be a better person,somehow.
I keep repeating the last line in my mouth. I think there's more meaning to it than just by reading it.
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Review of Fixated  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
i like the last two lines.
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Review of Behind the Vines  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
I hope that there will be a continuation...
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Review of All the Time  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
God is great!
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Rated: E | (2.5)
Prayer is enough to express/tell Him what we want to say.
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Review of How Things Were  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I love this poem sooooo much!
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Review of Eggplant  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
I'll try a new eggplant recipe! I'll try cooking it myself
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Review of Inside and Out  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Be beautiful inside and out
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
We can easily say that happiness is everywhere, but it really is hard to find.
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Review by sofiazesca Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
Love can actually really change us.
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Review by sofiazesca Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
this happens to a lot of people
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Review of The walk  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
It's so sad and yet very beautiful
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